@_@ Wow. Very well done. BRAVO!

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wow.... it's pretty...

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Incredibly awesome!

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Very very nice for a first try. Just wow. o.o

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wow...
the scenery is very beautiful....
the twilight, the dusk...
the sunset feeling is very touching...

wow...

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Very Nice... I like the colors and the felling.

hey this is pretty good, caught my eye on the first page. The angels are pretty good, which is the most important part when doing a city scape. The detail is good, although lacking a bit. Thats alright, once you can do angels right you can work on detail all you want. The two buildings next to the bridge (the small ones, circular and square ones) seem angled upward more than they should be. For the square one at the base of the tower by the bridge, try using the angle of the smaller building down in front on the left side of the picture. That might help it look more convincing. The circular one is a bit harder, but remember to use the angles you used for the other buildings, even the bridge, when crafting each structure. You probably know that already haha.

Its a great picture, i don't want you to think i'm being harsh, I like to help people by critiquing. Feel free to ignore me too.

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bravo. great job

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Actually I am glad for a critique... honestly this is my first time attempting to draw a city... so I need all the help I can get LOL.

Much like most of my work I wont revisit this... but your advice will be used to imrpove on future pieces

Thank you!!!

yeah i didn't mean you needed to fix it up, i know how it feels when you work on something for awhile. Just feel like finishing it and thats it lol. Heres some other advise, so bare with me.
When you draw a city scape, its helpful to use the horizon as a guide. Draw a dot anywhere on the horizon line. You can use that dot as a reference point for the straight lines of the roofs and bases of buildings to be angled towards (you draw the lines towards the dots, creating a realistic and uniform angle). You can use this for perspective as well. Not sure if this made sense, but maybe you know what i'm talking about already.

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